Paintball game

 WALHT - use emotive language - Looks like

The BIG idea: We want our writing to be interesting and exciting to read.. We are focusing on describing words. We are remembering to include: Colour Shape Texture Size To use similes		Remember to: I will re read my sentence to make sure it makes sense. I will think about how I will structure my writing and use my plan
Success Criteria	Self assessment High-light how you think you went. 😃 😃 😃      😃 😃 😃
I will find the describing words in my writing. I will write similes in my writing.
I will add describing words to describe how I think things look and feel.

 

Thwack the bus door went, you are probably thinking why a bus door  is opening because our whole family is there and it fills a whole big bus so we have our own one. 

We were at a go kart place that had a paintball arena. No one was going to do it. When the manager was about to pack up most of our family chose to do paintballing.

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When we walked in I was surprised. The helmets were like grey skimming stones and the safe place was like an army meeting place. I think I was about to go to war. The gear on me was like a green guey giant stepping on me. But then he put some smaller gear which was light as a feather. It wasn't actually that light but it was still light. There was a giant discussion on the rules. It was like waiting for a black and white  cow trying to give birth. The manager's number one rule was keep your helmet on. We had to pick  what would happen if someone took their helmet off. 1. Everyone gets one shot at you. I wanted to do that one cause it sounded fun. 2. They get off the field. At the end we 

chose the second one.

 

So first we got our guns and gathered outside. I was excited to shoot someone. I can’t wait. But first we had to take some photos. It was very boring. The second one was fun because we all got to point our guns at my grandpa. I wish I could have done that in the real game. The game was to grab a Black  flag and get to the other side. The whistle blew and we started. My cousin was scared like a cat being threatened. I got shot thousands of times I got hit in the hand it stung. My gun was all slimy like yummy jelly. In the end we won so the people who had some more bullets would go in a different round. 

We could shoot anyone so I did. I shot my uncle in the face and he got a shock like a person being electrocuted by yellow lighting. Me and my dad were being shot every direction. And we only had one place to hide. But we were still the last people standing. It was the best. At the end I went to the go karts. It was the best time ever.