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 Last saturday me and my family went to the speedway.When we got the giant silver gates I saw two kids holding hands. The boy was a vampire and devil perfect fit. The cars came out with people in them. It was a lolly scramble!!! I galloped faster than a horse. First I grabbed a mintie, a fruit]t burst, and the other candy you could imagine. Reds, purples,greens,yellows,and much more. After I settled down.My dad said “stay down there there's probably much more.

I could hear the grunting of the grumble of the saloons. They came around the track grumbling their engines.. The race started and plenty of cars kept racing.Then came the side cars they have no brakes and they are probably faster than a cheetah. Side cras are a motorbike and there is a spot which is like a kangaroo pouch. And the person in their leans. The motorbike gate went.Their wasa bike that had a dad and a son on it. The son fell off the bike. But was still good as gold.

Later that night we saw people with these swords That lit up. So me and my brother went for a little wander around the track. Oww my ear got blasted off by my brother saying over their “What” I yelped. “That's where they are,” Cole said.

We thought the line was going to be long so we ran faster than a crying deer running from predators.”few” I said not a long line.

The track was all muddy. When we had our light saber. We pretended that it was a racing flag. Funny shape and different colors . Still enjoyed it. It was time to fight  with our swords. Bad luck two my brother cause I one. Hee hee. A couple liong days later the fireworks came. It was not actually days, it was only minutes. Bang pop poof. It was long but it ended. Well that call was time for home.