My Reflection
WALHT structure our writing
Success Criteria Self Assessment
I will write my introduction (What I think, and a preview of what my writing will be about)
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I will use my plan to explain each of my arguments and reasons why I think that (research)
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I will end with a conclusion where I reiterate what I think.
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I think that dogs are better than cats in many different ways. In this persuasive text I will tell you three reasons why dogs are better than cats.
Firstly dogs are easier to snuggle with than cats, I think this because cats normally are feisty and are always trying to scratch you. That's not the only reason. Dogs are not fussy like cats. Dogs will just eat whatever is on the menu. But with a cat it will love the food for a couple days and than they will end up findisgustingisguting.
Secondly dogs just get busy outside playing, but with a cat you have to entertain them a lot especially a kitten. Sometimes it will get to much you have to kick them outside.
Lastly dogs are always protecting you, even the smallest of them all, and when they know they have done something wrong they will normally show a sign of guilt. You can see it in their eyes.
For all of these reasons above I believe that dogs are way better than cats.
Mālō e lelei Jakob,
ReplyDeleteThis is a great piece of persuasive writing that you have self-assessed.
Maybe you could have highlighted the success criteria table the same colour as what you highlighted in your writing so we could see the match.
Try and make sure that your examples match your opening statement. For example, in your first example you have said cats are easier to snuggle. One of your examples is about dogs not being fussy - that doesn't match snuggling.
Keep up the great mahi!
Mā te wā,
Mrs Naden